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#58 Posted: Sat Sep 05, 2009 5:16 pm |
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Er, where you put ワ, it is in fact supposed to be り. It's just written in a different style. Aside from that, there were only about 2-3 other errors. Here's the revised version:
清楚で、おしとやかなお姫さま。まみと仲良しになる。
とある国のプリンセスに生まれた彼女(本名 レウィシア・ラル・
ヘブンケール)は、何不自由ない生活を送っていた。しかし、周囲の
者達がなんでもやってしまう為、自分の力で何かをしたことがない事
を不満に感じていた。そんな時、大会会場の中継放送を見たレウィシ
アは、その熱気に興味をひかれ、こっそり城を抜け出して、大会会場
に向かうのだった。「お父様、ごめんなさい、私はどうしても大会にい
きたいですの。」箱入り娘が初めての冒険。しかし、サイフの中にはし
っかり王室のキャッシュカードが入っていたりした。けっこうしたた
かなお姫さまである。
Very very roughly, it states:
Neat and clean, she is a princess. She becomes close friends with Mami.
Born a princess in a certain country (real name Reuishia・Raru・
Hebunkeeru), she led a life which was not uncomfortable. However, she was discontent that she had not done anything on her own in life. Seeing a broadcast of the tournament, she snuck out of the castle to face the tournament. "Father, I am sorry, but I must go to the tournament no matter what." The girl who has led a sheltered life began her first adventure. [There are a couple more sentences, but I'm not sure what they mean - seems to mention the royal family's cash card though] |
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