Bomberman
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#2 Posted: Fri Jul 17, 2009 9:03 pm |
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Terribly sorry for the double post, but I've got Part 2, and I can say I'm a little bit more happy with it. Also the valentines card doesn't say who it goes to and who its from. Whys that? Just wait.
As Gangu quietly follows Shirobon, he doesn't realise he is about to lose his cover. Meanwhile, Mermaid Bomber daydreams about Birdy...
Shirobon: *walking turns to running* Whoever is following me please go away!
Gangu: Ok fine! You caught me!
Shirobon: *stops and turns around* Gangu? Why are you following me?
Gangu: I want to know who you're giving that card to.
Shirobon: I, can't say...
Gangu: Why not?
*wind blows card out of Shirobon's hand before he could say anything*
Shirobon: NO!! *runs after the card*
Gangu: *follows him*
*card blows over to Mermaid Bomber's house, out of reach of Shirobon and Gangu*
Mermaid Bomber: *looking out her window, daydreaming about Birdy* Oh Birdy..... *sees the card outside her window* Whats this? *opens the window and takes it, reads it* "Happy Valentines day, please be mine"..... *thinks and then becomes love struck* Birdy must of wrote it for me! How sweet of him... *looks out her window* But how'd the card get here?
*meanwhile*
Birdy: *looking a little freaked out as if he knows what Mermaid Bomber is thinking*
Shout: *walks outside her house to see him* Hey Birdy, ahev you seen.... *looks at him* Um, are you ok?
Birdy: I have a feeling that tody is going to be a long day.....
Shout: Why?
Mermaid Bomber: *charging in Birdy's direction with hearts in her eyes* Birdy!! I knew you cared!!!
Birdy: Because of that!!
Mermaid Bomber: *tackle hugs Birdy*
Birdy: Let go of me!
Mermaid Bomber: *doesn't let go* No! I love you!
Birdy: *looks at Shout* Help.
Shout: I can enjoy this for a while.
Birdy: Great..........
End of Part 2.
Again, I think I screwed up the perosnalities although I can't really say that about Mermaid Bomber since I never say her in action yet, although I most likely did mess her personality up. |
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