Bomberjack
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 #2 Posted: Tue Dec 18, 2007 11:39 pm |
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(Am I allowed to post in this thread...?)
It's okay so far. Nothing much has happened except for the introduction of the characters, but the idea of Sirius as a cardshark amused me.
A recommendation with regards to formatting: You may be better off doing double-spacing for the paragraphs and then using the "------" to denote scene changes. That's only my personal preference, though, so no need to listen to me. Just keep writing - we need new stuff in Bomberman fandom liekwhoah. o_o |
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